Amanda Michelle
My mom chose my name years in advance,
I wonder how she picked,
I think she was tricked.
My name means lovable,
I am anything but,
I have a temper that sometimes cuts.
The asperities,
I am only one of the many who turn to see,
If it is somebody who calls to me.
My name is so rudimentary that it is difficult,
Nobody remembers it, I don’t mind
It just means that they are blind.
I really don’t worry,
Maybe my mom knew what she was doing,
Like the sky, it is worth viewing.
There are six,
You can not change one letter,
I suppose it could not be better.
Then comes my middle name,
I sometimes doubt
What it’s about.
It sounds good together,
A match made well,
Flowing like water past a shell.
I know my name now,
She chose true,
It is unremitting yet always new.
Just awesome wow and I loved thaT you put your true feelings.
ReplyDeleteWow that was really good and I liked the rhyme scheme
ReplyDeleteVery confusing but it looks good
ReplyDeletePOSITIVE THINGS!
DeleteI loved it....it showed you were comfortable with your name!!!! Great job
ReplyDeleteVery nice rhyme scheme.. Awesome poem Amanda. :)
ReplyDeleteI like the different rhyme scheme of your poem and the fact that you were completely honest about how you feel towards your name.
ReplyDeleteAmanda,
ReplyDeleteI was blind, but now I see. I will not forget your name now! Good job.
It was really beautifully written , I liked the metaphors used too
ReplyDeleteI like how at first you kind of dogged your name but then at the end you basically said that it was special.(: great job.
ReplyDeleteAmanda! You're a great writer and I loved your poem! Nice use of the vocab.
ReplyDeleteThat was a amazing poem,I liked your rhyming words too
ReplyDeleteI think this poem was really cute and I enjoy how you let your real feelings about your name show.
ReplyDeleteWas very well put. I like how you expressed your true feelings about it. Nice job :)
ReplyDeleteI love the feeling that you put into it. And you lied, you didn't match your shirt when you were done! (:
ReplyDeleteI'm having flash back like I've read your poem again. I love your poem it's great n you are lovable . Well maybe it's because you show it
ReplyDeleteLoveliness!! Keep it up poems through rhyme scheme seem to be your thing so keep it up!
ReplyDeleteThat was really good!!! I loved how you started off the line with only two word!! And I forgot that your middle name was Michelle..lol
ReplyDeleteThe way your poem goes great wordings
ReplyDeleteGreat job. There's so much that I like about it
ReplyDeleteI loved where you said, they must be blind! That's awesome because there are so many things the eyes can not see, just like how unique you are. Can be interpreted differently, from different perspectives, very cute! :)
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